abrade leather
against fleshly need
as hipbone pressed
to thigh
compels this spanning
tongue shackled to skin
yields shiver of want
while knuckles clench
to implore a swift
piercing
culmination
Author notes
Prompt: Picture found on photobucket, 30 words
(abrade=grind)
In a list
A contest entry
- astride (adults only) by JinSays.
1754 points, ended September 14, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Steaming write Auntie J! I have missed this poems of yours lol. Congratulations on the Gold once again!
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Grown folks using grown language doing grown folk thing. Like the word there.
Love ya. Write on.
Dez
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Sis...all I can say is this is delicious! You write so beautifully of sensual moments!
~sigh~
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hot hot hot!!!!! blood pressure medication!!! call 9-11 Stop this old guys like me can't handle it!! lol You are awesome!!!!!!!!
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Unashamed and true (Y) excellent work.
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Thank you
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Brevity at best. The picture fits perfectly and doesn't only accompany your words but I feel it complements it just as well. You have a voice for sensual.
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Sensual is one of my favourite genres So glad to hear that!
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Another Gold
" while knuckles clench
to implore a swift
piercing
culmination" <--- sounds like a 'Maverick Maneuver'
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Well.. the rest of the write is my maneuvering 
You are funny!
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Ooooo very nice and sexy! Short, compact inagery in this which sure hits its mark
Gosh if I wore leather, the bulges would hang over Not a pretty sight like that pic or the spicy poem to go with it.
Congratulations on your well deserved gold hun
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yea.. I wouldn't dare wear 'em either
Thanks
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Aww come on with you I bet many here woluld disagree with that lol. I think you'd look mighty fine m'dear
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lol
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SIgh
its very sensual, yet youre compelled to keep reading, i was kinda sad it ended, but i know the poem continues for the characters, we are just not invited. -
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Thankies I'm stoked you are here
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irresistible, ayep.
Kind of makes you wonder what you can do with one arm tied behind your back.
Congrats on the Gold Jacks ..
~S
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Well, what a great piece of peotic gold.
Hmmmm
Makes the mind kind of wander
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Beautifully done Jacks...
Soft, sensual & so wonderfully expressed in so few words...
Impressive as always...
Keep up the good work & congratulations on a well deserved Gold shiny...
Well done!!!
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How do you do it? Always hot, always fresh, alwass meaningful, yet not formulaic or repetitive. You have me in awe.
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You humble me ... I'm glad it's always fresh, that's always a concern
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Poet
perhaps a delicious event that culminates in a very dramatic clilmax. lol hot indeed.
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Thanks Bob
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Now this is powerfully intoxicating...such deep need screams forth from these sensual words...this is HOT...beautiful Sis.
Ya!
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Thanks Sis! Glad you liked
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I love it when I come to your poetry and there is a gold trophy there before I have even read it. You my dear sister always amaze me. Standing ovations!
Love,
Amera♥
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Thanks Sis!
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Oh my Sis, I see you certainly haven't lost your touch! Whew..Hot damn girly Congrats on a most well deserved Gold..sexy, sensual and Yum!
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Hehe.. thanks Sis.. this one, not so lovey, more .. errmm.. something else
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Angel,
you neverr cease to amaze me.
even when you say your muse isnt
working, this piece blows me away,
now this one!!! is awesome beauitiful
Seduction!!
with love and blessings
Rend
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Thanks hun
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ahem....
yeeeeah baby, I couldnt wait to read this.... I knew it was gonna be spectacular....and alas, I was right
welcome back Jackie's muse, now stay your tempermental self right there, and let her write again.
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I am glad I didn't disappoint
Thanks so much hun!
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oooooo. yummy.
enticing words for a hot picture prompt. loved the shiver of want, but the piercing culmination sorta makes a girl quiver a bit
nice... nice... very nice.
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Hehe.. thanks!
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tongue shackled to skin
yields shiver of want
Hell yeah. I love that bit. this was very well written for so few words. good luck in the contest x
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" tongue shackled to skin
yields shiver of want"
that is very hot...enjoyed it
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed
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Again and again and again, and....
this write gives me shiver of want... Mmmmm thanks, hot stuff!!!
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Exactly the response I was hoping for
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yup
most definitely
as this is perfect
I've longed the
uninhibited
as many days
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I thank you most kindly sir!
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Is there such things as classy porn?
If such a thing is possible,
this should be like one of those word montages preceding a movie with a soundtrack.
;
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Cool
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You are a naughty girl
Love it hun
and so nice to see you writing again for us all to enjoy
Hot steamy and you role play fits perfect
Good luck
Julie x
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uuhhmmm.. yeah.. GRIND huh? well uhm.. it's kinda heated on this page for a youngin like me! ..l.o.l. whew.. got milk?
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Well.. she's wearing them sexy leather pants, sitting on his knee.. what else could she do? LOL
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Good grief... I come back after almost 3 months and you're still spreading smut! Hi, pearl- also, I likey! G
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Come one!!! I've only writen 3 things in 3 months and this one is the only smutty one!!! hehe .. missed you G!!!
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Yaaaaaaaaaaa babyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!! Hot Hot Hot!!! Damn girl!!! I have missed your writing......
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Thanks hun!!!
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Wowzy, not sure I was old enough to read this! Hot, hot, hot for sure! You certainly have found your muse, only been a week since the last poem! Very nicely done, you fall back into stride so fast is frightening!..lol. While the rest of us struggle to find one word A superb (as ever) write hunni, I shall wish you luck but you shouldn't need it
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Hehe.. thanks for reading hunny ... I know how you love this genre not!
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hehehehe
and she's back ladies and gentlemen! the mistress of sexy writes
nice work kitty!
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I'm back baby!!! mwahaha lol
Yea.. stress makes my stupid... you know this!!
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Superb piece, Jackie, hot-hot
"implore a swift
piercing
culmination" Yes! Awesome
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Glad you thought it was hot-hot Vito!
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Wow, this write is on fire. You're really good at these lol. Thank you so much for the comment
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Woo Hoo! You posted, and it's steamy hot! Love it!
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dear lord between you and mark i am on fire
damn damn damn
nicely penned
now kiwi..where ya at love
Love you and good luck
Passions
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Thanks you my passionate one! Mark's is nawtier! lol
Love you sweetheart
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Superb sweetheart, you have lost nothing in your absence from writing. This was perfectly worded, brilliantly vivid and yes so hot. Best to you in the contest
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Thanks hun!!!
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hmm
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lol
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I dig that culmination!
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Yeah!! Imma take that as I haven't completely forgotten how to do adult then.. woot
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