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You honor me with that smirk
that candy cane painted smile
those pink pig tails drive me wild
long legs make me weak

I want you

candy cane girl

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LOL Fucking LOL

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 12

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    LOL I enjoyed this piece. I am not sure about the title. I think that may be for insiders, but the poem is packed with lust. Great job.

    Mike