Love is a Tool
Created by the Cavemen
Back in the Day
When they Discovered
The miricle of the Heart
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They left puzzle Clues
Up til Now
Now the tool isn't Taken
SERIOUSLY
And everyone wants a Piece
Just to shit on It
And fuck you Over
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Only cavemen know how to use It
To twist it into a forever Sort
Of Thing
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Back in the day it was Easily
UNDERSTOOD
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until the hearts word died
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Sacrificed
Itself so it's wounds Would
HEAL
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Broken
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Beaten
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Slaughtered
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Inside the Human
.CHEST.
Please tell me what you think
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bitterness of love
oh my dear sweet little one, your words ache my soul and blister my heart, love can be bewildering and unforsaken, it can also be beautiful if it is true,though it must be a work in progress, i just love the perspective of cavemen and how it has been lost, and you are right my dear so many do not take it serious anymore,,kep on writing my friend,,,blessings of light,life,laughter and of course love..Firestorm.
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ur words mean a great deal to me. Thanks so much.
times a ton!!! I need internet but alas a libary will do but I'm timed 
xoxox
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Nice job. I do not have such a bitter opinion on love myself. I realize that most of my problems are self created. My only major suggestions are to fix the spelling errors - line nine 'seriously'; line fourteen 'into'.
Mike
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Thanks so very much
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Ha! Only the happy people ever say shit like "Loves not so bad"
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HA HA I kno right?
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