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Rock-a-Hoola Dreams

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There once was a glorious place in the desert
Right smack in the middle of Death Valley.
It was called The Rock-a-Hoola Water Park.
And brother, that place was right up my alley.

It was a virtual oasis of wholesome family fun
Where bright, turquoise-green water flowed.
The laughter of children filled the air above it
As the rivers washed away the dust of the road.

Happy Rock ‘n Roll music from a simpler time
Still played there as if not a year had gone by.
It was a place parents could trust with their kids.
As American as baseball and mom’s apple pie.

Sadly, the Rock-a-Hoola Water Park is no more.
The doors are closed and the bright rivers are dry.
Music and laughter no longer flood from the gate.
No water beckons the road-weary traveling by.

I left the highway and stood at the rusty gate.
It squeaked mournfully in the hot desert air.
The contrast between what it was and is now
Made me think of the man who’d built it there.

He manifested his dream right out of the sand.
And the dream came true - for a while anyway.
But the dream died and now lies abandoned.
There is nowhere left for the children to play.

That’s what bothered me the most, of course,
But its closing bugged me metaphorically, too.
You see, that water park glistening in the sun
Represented anything great that we try to do.

Our dreams are as bright as that shining oasis.
The water - our desire to make them come true.
The desert - the world, full of fear and doubt.
The rocky sand a delicate flower grows through.

But I don't want to live a life without dreams;
A boat meant for the sea, yet never embarks.
And I don't want to spend my life in a world
Without shimmering Rock-a-Hoola Water Parks.

So if your eyes have lost the long-ago sparkle
Of a soft dream you imagined way back when,
Open the gate for business, repaint the old sign,
And let the waters of desire flow freely again.


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  • Grunts Girl silver member
    September 15

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    this reminds me of many things and times that were....
    like Marineland in Florida- the origional sea life park.... got to visit when i was a child and then went back about 10 years ago to find it dried up and closed. I understand it was old and not good enough for the animals but that isn't what this is about
    so easily tangible things can be removed, however, memories never can

    well unless your smashed in the head with a baseball bat and lose your memory, but really, how often does THAT happen!


  • condor gold member
    September 14

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    This is a beautiful iece that speaks of the sadness of seeing something so wonderful that brought families together, disappear. The remnants left to be buried over time and forgotten. How many will remember as the years pass? The younger will not know therefore cannot know and remember with you. It is really sad. I think I saw this many years ago....not in reality as I have never been to the States, but somewhere it was mentioned. When did it close down? What an oasis of beauty it must have been and to think that the laughter and the fun that was had there is now a distant memory crying out to be revived. Excellent write indeed.


    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      September 15

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      Hey Condor,

      I think it closed down about five years ago. The story goes that one of the employees was using one of the slides after hours, which was strictly forbidden, and seriously injured himself. Of course, as is the modern custom, he didn't take personal responsibility for it and sued the owner instead. And the courts, being what they are, entertained his lawsuit. He prevailed and the water park went out of business because it was already barely surviving financially.

      Not sure how accurate that story is but I read it on the internet so it must be true. lol You're right, though. It is sad that places like this have so much trouble staying open. There's a terrible lack of wholesomeness in the world these days. But they're not all gone! If you ever visit the Grand Canyon, check out one of my other favorite kitschy hang-outs - the Flintstones village/campground near the west gate. They re-created the town of Bedrock complete with stone houses, dinosaurs, characters from the show, and a smoldering volcano with a pteradactyl circling over it! I am five years old again every time I pass through the gate. The people working in the gift shop are ultra-cool, too.

      Here's a photo array I found of it on Flickr -
      http://www.flickr.com/photos/mrs_rachel/3380678738/

      Take care buddy

      Mark


  • CaliOkie silver member
    September 14

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    These little bits of the past sometimes bleed forward in time . . . but then the present comes along and sweeps them into the wind, like the desert sand. When they are gone it is like a bit of us has gone with them. So many places I have known and loved that are only memories now . . . and as memories they can not help but fade.

    This is an excellent bit of nostalgia and has left me missing places I used to haunt that are themselves now haunted.

    Well done. Well deserved silver.

    Garrison


  • BabyBun silver member
    September 13
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    yeah - I totally get this and its sentiment. You go straight to my finalist list. Fantastic poem!


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 12

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    I've seen a few of 'em come and go, too, much to my chagrin. As always, you tell a fabulous tale, with impeccable rhyme. Good luck in the contest, Scribe. Always a pleasure to see you posting, my Friend.




  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 12

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    Excellent job. I liked the message. I can see why a place like this makes you nostalgic. Sometimes the megaplexes like 6 Flags dont hold the same charm.

    Mike


  • An Old Codger gold member
    September 12

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    Outstanding

    Great rhyme and flow. This piece gives a person plenty to think about.
    Best of luck to you in the contest.

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