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What would'nt i give

What wouldn’t I give to be with you?
To live every moment we went through
How would it be, being in your arm?
Looking through your eyes, safe from all harm

What would it take
To undo every mistake
For us to love each other
And make it stay forever

Where else would I find your light?
That turns everything bright..
And how can I open your eyes?
To show u all of these lies.

I need you to see
That this is me
The person you loved
Yet the one you shoved

How will I live?
What wouldn’t I give?
To have another chance to hold you
To do everything we planned to

How would it feel, to sit next to you again?
To feel the magic of your precious grin
To wrap my arms around your neck
And to have our lips gently peck

I want you back, I truly do
I fooled my self that I'm over you
I can't help my self, not anymore
Your still right there, my hearts core

Time goes by even if I don't want it to
My loneliness can only end by you..
Could u tell me what I have to give?
Cause only with u could I ever live...

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  • xxDemonicxx
    September 12, 2009
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    i dont know why it took me a long time to write this one, maybe because it has been a while since the last time i wrote a poem
    and Thanks aloo0o0oot patty =D i appreciate your sweet comment ^_^


  • Gulfbreeze gold member
    September 12, 2009

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    How sweetly written D. This flows very nicely, you did an awesome job. I am glad to see that you are writing. You dont need my help with this one sweetie, you got it!