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how do i give what i do not have
how  do i find trust when there is none
how do i find the beauty in life
when all that's left is black and blue

pain from yesterday ...just wont mend
tho no tears are shed
and no screams are heard
i hold my head high
this woman in me is made of steel
i wont let you see me break

how do i show you my tears when there are none
how do i let you see the real me with failing
how do i let you in
when all i do is push you away


pain from yesterday ...just wont mend
tho no tears are shed
and no screams are heard
i hold my head high
this woman in me is made of steel
i wont let you see me break



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  • His-Dreamer
    September 19

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    I like this. I think more could be added to it, however, I have no idea what that more is. It feels like your emotions are being held back while you wrote this, but I can still get that feeling of wanting to let go & show this person who you are but not knowing how.