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Wake

a burial / a divorce from the corporeal / or the not real / a flower / dropped and nearly trampled / broken stem between my fingers / a whisper / that comes swiftly / so sweet and calm / a spirit / broken away from another / until another divorce / a marriage / in another realm / to that other realm / a sleep / a wake

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  • dabpunx
    September 20
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    it an interesting term. excellent imagery and journey to the other side.