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Logic and thinking is what he does,
no family no friends,
candy's a must.

His habits are bad,
his tooth is quite sweet,
he never wears socks or shoes on his feet.

wrote down his name,
sealed his own fate,
counting his time,
twenty-three days.

I saw him smile,
once apon a time,
winning at games,
and solving a crime.

But now he's gone,
just memories remain,
i'll think of him always in sunshine or rain.

His loose white shirt,
and black long hair,
his dark wide-eyes,
did anyone care?

And even now,
with everything done,
I always smile,
at the fact that he won.

 

Checkmate.

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  • Strike08
    October 10

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    WOW!

    Its really good,for a 5 mins poem thats really good
    And I have 2 agree a lil bit more emotion would make even better
    but hey,Its really good


  • xChained-Fatex
    September 23

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    Amazing

    This was just amazing I don't even have words to describe how nice this poem is!

  • Strike08
    September 15
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    hey!


  • EllenHarrison
    September 11
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    Ok

    I think i could have put way more emotion into it but hey for 5 minutes work not too bad lol .. xx