Little letters across my wrist
Inscribing my emotions with a twist.
Every day I wish I could turn back time, but
Somehow the deeper I cut the higher I climb.
Author notes
This poem is about me carving the word ' lies ' on my wrist. because i have been lied to and betrayed to so many times.
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Great. its nice2 know that im not the only1 w/them feelings, that others can relate.,,
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this is a really great poem. a lot of pain, tells alot in such few words. but really good.
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hi. is a applause for fun...
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argh
i have a horrible scar now. -
it does help for a little wile but not for ever trust me grate read such pain and truth in it all you have to do is read this and you can feel the pain you feel keep upi the good work thanks for sharing bless it be
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A lot is said in this piece, carving lies into your wrist will scar badl, ive done it with love and hate and peoples names....
a great job and i really liked it, a great used of rhyme aswell. And the last line i can realte to, it can be true
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Humm..you did a philosophy of the life here with the depth and the message to understand as well..love it...many thanks for sharing it...
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