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Loves a Cheesy Sweet Veneer

My contact list can fit no more
And yet of these I’ll not explore

When ring tones sing their melody
I let my voicemail take custody

I start and stop text incomplete
I can not think a gracious greet

Uncertainty has found access
Ugh belly aching nervousness

Oh why is it my brains a shred?
Coherent thoughts have long since fled

My heart beat skips a thump or two
My world is suddenly askew

I rue the day that I met you
For now I’m lost, in love with you.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 11

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    Amen..this is the prayer of the lovers..and this makes the story of the heart very thoughtful here and quite logical as well..love the beauty of the words and message around..well done..