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Absorbing Fall

While spring is a time of twitterpating,
Silly, joyful, giddy,
Fall is more subdued, a time to absorb;
The smell of fires starting up in fireplaces,
The crispness of the air, 
Soft sweaters wrapped around cold arms,
Snuggling under warm blankets,
Watching flame-colored leaves drift from the trees...

Fall seeps into one's soul

Softly, subtly, deeply.

A contest entry

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  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    September 28
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    o0o! This just makes me want to go cuddle with the hubby! Wonderful write. Simple and very sweet!


  • Kari gold member
    September 26

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    This was so beautiful and the image was crystal clear. Thanks so much for this stunning poem.

    Kari


  • jcat gold member
    September 23

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    Very aptly named!!!! I felt like I had indeed absorbed the feel of autumn by the end of your piece here!! Very well done and thank you for your lovely entry!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 12

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    welcome to all poetry

    You have richly described so many things I love about the season. Beautiful write, good luck in the contest.

    ♥
    Shawna
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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    September 12

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    There is something about Autumn that has a romance to it, and it is very inspiring to the poet's muse...twitterpating, never heard of that, but it sounds fun!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourslef on this site!


    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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