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Trevor Bear, Daisy, and Pettie

butter milk yellow and marshmellow white
black and white spotted or golden tone
these are what true love is shown

blackish brown darnk amber or chocolate
these are through what love and loyalty are seen
the loyalty and playfulness cant be compared
once you look at you best friend animal or bird

Author notes

this is about my 3 dogs..of 2 different ages

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