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Struggling

I'm doing bad
All over again
I'm feeling the sadness
Creeping in
I'm trying to move on
But I just can't see
How to leave you behind
How to be happy
It's been over a year
But we were so close
I can't hold back the tears
I loved you the most
You meant the world to me
You were my life
My life was complete
I had you by my side
Forever and ever babe
That was our line
It's what we'd say
To make everything fine
We planned our life
Down to the kids
Their names, our house
And where we'd live
My other half
You would become
We picked our path
And paved it with love
hand in hand
At the end of the aisle
Never letting go
Going the miles
Hearts as one
You and me
Mr. and Mrs.
We would be
We planned our life
And paved our path
Little to know
It'd be cut off by death

Author notes

Dedicated to Patrick Alan Fowler Jr.
I still miss you and love you greatly babe
R.I.P.

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  • RomeoKapulet
    September 11

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    Very awesome write. Lot of feelings and emotions can be felt with the words. The rhyming fit excellent as well. Nice way to portray your feelings for him and I am and always will be sorry for your loss hun

    RIP


    • JustaDreamer257
      September 11
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      Thank you. I was talkin with my best friend kyle about him at like 4AM (he was one of patricks friends too) and this poem just came to me...
      Thank you again