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A Heart's Murmur: Failure in Four Lines

I've waited for you for so long
That the only thing stimulating my heart
Is the throbbing beat of our song
From the speaker that is my bed.

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  • DevinCora
    September 14

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    haha... wow. This is sheer brillance!! It is not failure... I absolutely love it. Its so complete, but then again it makes me wonder. Your words do so much for me...