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fall into the black

red against the blue sky
broken like a doll
that is not loved anymore
just like a dove
with a broken wing
i am falling so fast
i can not keep up
when will the darkness fall
when will the sun rise
to express the beauy of life
when will it not be cosumed
by the shadow of life
when will the songs of sadness
be songs of my memories
when will my memories not save me
when  will i just let go
of all the happy times
they kept me alive
i thank you all for them
when will i fall into the blackness
into the silence
of this dark life
when will i bleed
without caring
that it hurts
when will i cry
but not because im sad
when will i not be scared
to just fall into the black




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  • angel-lover
    September 14
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    wow

    this is such a strong powerful read flowing with emotion and deepness wonderful poem xx


  • manoguru
    September 13
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    cool... it sounds like a steady beating of a drum