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Tomorrows gaze

Raindrops adorn, the sky tonight.
Lessen learned, truthful stars comply.
Summer has passed, winter is running near.
Grass standstil, echoers timelessly in my heart.
Winters blessing, cold to flutter and breathe in.
Tempered grace, that thorn, tomorrows gaze.

Drop by drop, the leaves bloosm winds in song.
Life begins, ending ever so slightly conjoined in my ear.
Densing timidly, but fearful in the rage to be done.
Sounds so coy, deploy sorrowful with each smile.
The doors of nature open, machines of love catch my dressing.
Undressing slowly the brightest creation, born and shattered.

The purest snesation I can taste in my gaping mouth.
The drop of fruits, in labours to be won.
The soothing words nature calls, in songs birds and pillow coats.
Beauty seen and untouched, nature has arisen softly.
To be that all design of life, on earth in heaven.
Sweet joys, echoe on my face turning smiles to laughter.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 22

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    I love how your poem breathed
    Those moments those times, both happy and sad
    The waiting the gentle tones
    and to breathe again

    thank you and best wishes to you

    Julie

  • Macsword
    September 12

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    Good write...

    for the season. Can sense the coming of the cool and the falling of the leaves.


  • negatoreyfan
    September 11

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    I love this poem allot


    1 stanza This gives me a chilling silence
    2 stanza A great beautiful solitude
    3 stanza Calling her near and so excited about it

    Well penned