hair black as the midnight sky
laughs like that of the wind loud but still soft
tall like that of a small tree
eyes dark brown as sweet dark chocolate
skin pale like that of a fluffy white cloud
oh sweet love of mine of who you are now
you bring utter joy into my mind
you bring me true happiness that stops my heart
you make me feel more important than anyone else
you are my true love
my best so far
sweeter than candy you are
better than anyone I've ever loved before
you are my best love and the greatest
better than all of the men in the world
you are my favorite person
you are my current crush
and so i ask you why do you make me fell as though I'm the only one there
why are you so good to me?
Author notes
Written April 4th, 2004
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I really like how you worded this but the syllables need a little work. It doesn't flow smoothly but if you made this a song it would work nicely... lIke as a slow song.
... I love reading random poets because everyone reads authors known to the site... not the ones who are new or aren't recognized easily. I like this poem...
!~*kari*~!
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