Deep red fades to golden
Fragrance of dead season
Surrounds my being
Dry winds of dusk
Announce in whispers
Winter is on the door
For once cry till you want
Before your emotions freeze...
Author notes
"Before Autumn Falls Asleep" by Emilie Leger
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie! by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended September 15, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think.
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wow.. this is awesome. i am adding you as a favorite.
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Way to go on the prompt!!!
All the best to you in the contest.
Ken
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This was a cool poem, loved the wording, and the end really puncher home…
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Wow very interesting take on the
prompt.. I enjoyed your wonderful
imagery and depth placed throughout.
Made for an excellent read!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Beautiful. The change of seasons is so pretty, yet so tragic in a way.
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