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Forever Friends

Forever Friends
Going down a road that never ends
Better late than never
To every endeavor
Travel here and afar
As high as a star
Off to make brand new history
With a little mystery
Beutiful as a diamond in the sky
No matter how high

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  • Topnotchsy
    September 15

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    I like the feeling of innocence and joy in this poem, something that comes naturally to children, but must be fought for and cherished as we get older.

    • Hawkeyes
      October 27

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      I just want to say thanks!

      I just want to say Thanks for the comment that you gave me with this poem. I will have to read some of your works sometime soon.