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love like gold

Blood Enriched seams of love
another story, born of gore
a dream shattered that none can see
a girl, shriveled on her knees
Cold and crying, torn and alone
no one ever, knew her love
For it was poison to their lips
and fire to their hearts
whenever anyone spoke of her love

her love felt love for another
her limbs broke, one after another
she couldn't believe her love was lost
or so she thought, her love, was lost
Black poison to her lips, the mans name
she never speaks
To think her love had flown away
like a dove, free of shame

She felt her limbs and eyes grow cold,
as the winter frost took hold
a year now past her heart still aches
for her love, of all sakes
She felt her knees grow weak and old
for her past, her shining gold.


~for a little something, they should know, A heart to give, A love to sow

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  • nightrose89
    September 15
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    very nice you'll have to tell me the meaning behind it sometime