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Caught in the Bears Trap

Be wise and kind
Listen well to my advice
For one day you’ll find
That it will save your life

Everyday you will walk alone
No one can help you
It is just the way we live
We walk these paths alone
We talk only to ourselves
We stalk the path of no one

Just walk the barren forest path
Make it your own destiny

Don’t stray into the trees
No matter whose voice you hear.
Keep your head high
Just look ahead

If you dare stray away
You will be sorry
For one wrong step
Will trigger a snapping sound
As the bears trap clings
To the bone in your leg

Scream all you want to
As your nerves are shattered

Plead and cry for mercy
Try and beg someone to save you
But what you don’t understand
Is rescue will never come

Never go away from your path,
Stay the course and you’ll be fine.
Travel the forested path
And worry will never strike you
For this path brings safety
No snags or pain to come

But if you dare defy fates plan
Beware of the consequence that follows.

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  • lesbian-in-love
    September 13
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    Nicely written. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • RowanMoon
    September 11
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    luved it and oh so true ..one question tho ..why is so hard to stick to the path?


    • SinInChaos
      September 12
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      No real answer to that, you just have to find out for yourself.