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Peices

They tell me I try too hard.
Apparently I need to let go
But the truth is that they don’t know.
I’m consumed with constant guilt
Sometimes it’s so crazy
That nothing can save me
Those few short moments
Moments where I went so wrong
Doomed to fail all along
I tried to be perfect but…
Falling apart is easier.

Author notes

Inspired in part by the song Peices by Sum 41

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  • x0charlie-redhead0x
    September 13

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    um. hello.

    *too not to.
    anyway. this is wrought with emotion, and (even though its cliche) i think i know how this works. hang in there, k?