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This Is How Love Looks

this is what love looks like.
imagine her
spinning out of control
without no control
in your thoughts.
this is what love looks like.

the touch of her lips
on the tips of your
lips is a love song played
on a saxophone.
i hypnotize myself with
her skin tone.
this is what love looks like.

mirrors touch her silhouette
i want everything to do
with her forever until the
end of time. i am astounded
because this is what love
looks like.

this is how love looks
sensual moments in time
shared with her in my arms
with no place for harm just
touch me some more if this
is how love looks.

if this is how love looks
then don't let it stop
let's love until we drop
into the bliss that destiny
has promised us.

yes let's do this if this
is what love look like.

I tend to make horrible grammatical erros and can't ever find tem on my own. Maybe becasue I dont try hard enough but whatev. if you see em please say so. THNX -sub

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