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All Things New

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Dewdrop kisses honeysuckle sweet

soft, succulent, delectable treat,

nature awakens with the morning dew

in blooming delight of all things new.


 

Bird of paradise, passions embrace

cherry blossoms aromatic trace,

a crocus smiles in the morning light

before me a scintillating sight.


 

On my window-sill sits a swallow

sing song joy for his mate to follow,

the critters have all come out to play

spring has sprung on this glorious day.

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  • stavykm gold member
    November 1

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    Oh sis this is just so beautiful. I loved this poem so much and it was so peaceful to read as I have just awoke this morning. Oh the beauty of this picture you capture it so well and beyond. Oh how I love nature writes and the peace that they bring. What an excellent poetess you are so truly gifted.

    Wishing You Many Blessings,
    Much Love Always,
    Your Sis,
    Kelle Marie


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    October 31

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    Oh wow! This is so beautiful. I get the feeling of spring being in the air when I read it. I can't wait for spring again, I was excited for the cold and now I'm ready to see things start coming back to life lol. Great write and keep the pen flowing.


  • lacef
    October 4

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    I love it.

    There are prettir seasons, springtime is the best FEELING mentally, and spirtually!!! New beginnings!


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    September 28
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    Lovely write, a very sweet poem. Great rhyme and meter!

  • Kari gold member
    September 26

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    What A beautiful site! I wouldn't mind being there and seeing those critters myself! Just lovely and inspirational.

    Kari


  • Legend silver member
    September 25

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    Somewhere along the line my friend i missed this one.So pleased i got the chance to catch up with it
    It has that wonderful spring, of spring in its feelings A beautiful image painted A joy to read
    Good luck in the contest


  • jcat gold member
    September 23

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    Quite a lovely little piece!! Your word choice led to wonderful imagery that tickled the senses delightfully, and the picture made me long for the tropics in summer!! Very well done and thank you for your entry!

  • hezakiah
    September 15
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    Very nice.


  • Cloudskyseer
    September 11

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    I enjoyed your poem very much. The early morning in springtime sounds so nice considering how it is right now where I live. Makes me wish the world would turn a little faster to speed up the seasons.


  • daviscth
    September 11

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    Oh my goodness!! This is simply delightful. The imagery is just perfect and I love the picture. Good luck in the contest my darling friend.


    • Frogzter gold member
      September 11
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      Thanks Cathy! You are far too kind my friend. Good to see you back. I know you have been terribly busy. I hope all is well with the family.

      Much love,

      Frogz~

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