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Bird of Fire

Avia of mythical legends and flame,
with powers most cunning, noble, and bold.
Jaw bones drop at the sound of its name,
viewing this beast is quite a sight to behold!

For this fare creature, great feelings I feel,
even though this animal is not real.

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  • Celtic Legend
    November 12
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    Cool! I really liked this.


  • lolagirl
    September 12

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    is it a pheonix? i havent looked at the comments below so i could guess. Beautifully written and you described this bird beautifully!!!!! Im glad i read it before it turned to ash and was reborn again (harry potter heehee)