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Pixillated Hill


Now to climb our pixillated hill
Drunk with love we sweetly have our say
Words that evaporate on the wind
As our parlour waits for cleaning way

Pots and pans in kitchen shining
Next dishes needing washing time
Soap bubbles soundless fly in the air
As you pledge your daily chores to mine

Under stairs Hoover silently awaits
Plight we the duster to a happy sing
Your feet and mine step oh so very light
Dust and dirt disappear on gilded wings

Once more together hands entwined
Of housework now we've had our fill
Our tasks now gone we turn to joy
Have drinks galore back up our hill

Author notes

A tribute to the rhyme and rhythmic skills of Zero the Hero

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 11

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    I love the title. Beautiful imagery in this. Stunning poem. I love the Hoover line.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~