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You never came around for dinner

Sat on the table
Missing 12 more
I eat without love
Awaiting betrayal

Yet you never came
Abstaining emotions
All your promises
Clang like silver

Crucified hopes
While doing dishes
Bread and wine
Put in the bin whole

No mourning
For waking up alone
Resurrecting
My damnation

Author notes

Something I wrote after another dissapointing attempt at having dinner with someone I liked. Oh well...

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  • feetus
    October 29

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    Perhaps it's best for your writing that dinner plans didn't go well,
    this is very cold and dark. It's good to read from you again and
    thanks for sharing.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 22
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    Dark, emotional, well said


  • Bluemonday silver member
    September 11

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    Ahh I'm sure so many of us have been down a simular road...Powerful and evocative...Dan