I definitely had the likeness of a child.
My pockets were full of pebbles, red ones, blues ones, brown ones, and black ones – the memories I kept at hand to retrieve and admire their color and smoothness, which they got from rolling around in the ocean’s waters.
I had a couple of good-sized stones and seashells, too.
Though, the sea glass was always the one that seemed to cut me despite its dull edges.
My mind was the ocean, busy and calm in one.
It could be stormy and angry with gray clouds that threatened to send dreary rains.
It could also be sunny and full of life. Sometimes it was simply vast and empty, reaching depths I did not know I possessed; the abysses that held all my mysteries. The sky was my dreams, reflective of the watery memories below.
The puffy clouds scarred the sky; pink and orange when happy
and the dark clouded nights when there was no moon, nothing to shine on the truth. The ocean held the pebbles of my past, the big and small, the tragedies and comedies. Even the ones that you thought would never stick with you but one day you’d find those pebbles washed up on shore.
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- Color Your Soul by RainbowXButterflies.
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does this make sense?
Comments
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Of course it makes sense
I thought it was sweet you on the ocean collecting little treasure little rocks and shells that's have a story to tell
there shapes I love the way you brought out the sky and the colors and the pattern of the clouds I also liked the you identified the differents moods dreary threatning also the part where you mention being out at ful force and yet lifecan seem so vast and empty. I thought it was quiet splendid. make sense! you bet!
Blessing!
Sharon



