Take me close in your arms....
Take me close to your heart....
A magenta passion has been warming within
Crimson feelings have soared
A flame full of life sweetly burns in my heart
Which is suddenly, faithfully yours
A soft velvet flutter begins in my soul
Carried throughout all my being
How deeply they're buried, the roots of this amour
Through passage of time, I'll be feeling
O wonder of wonders that I hope never cease
Emotions that make me believe
The wings of the butterflies caught in my chest
Beat wild whenever you leave
As the waves of the ocean when the silver moon sways
Rush ever closer to shore
So my thoughts turn to you with the rush of my heart
Which is suddenly, ardently yours
Author notes
For Adam...
Comments
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How beautiful! I love the soft rhymes in this. It gives it such a gentle love-filled tone. And the descriptions as always are beautiful. I especially loved the way you ended it.
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This is really sweet and heart felt, and i absolutely love it. If every person in the world could express themselves like you, there would easily be more sweethearts left. Its excellent!
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Why thank you so much.
Your comments are very sweet; I appreciate your opinion on this. It was certainly heartfelt, but I still feel like it is quite inadequate. Thank you for reading and commenting. 
S
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