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Are You Lost?

am I losing you?
is the love you once felt fading away?
it seems like lately, you're not giving your all
it's like you're holding something back
that could jeopardize our relationship
how can you doubt my feelings for you?
you already have my love, my heart,
my complete devotion
what more can I possibly give?
just say the word, you can have that too
please understand
I don't want to lose you
you've given me love and support
when I felt like my life was falling apart
you understand me better
than I do myself at times
I don't think I could live my life
without you to lean on
you are my reason for living
please tell me why you're acting like this
why are you constantly ignoring my words,
my thoughts, my actions, my feelings?
is it because you're not ready to accept them?
am I so complicated, so damaged, so... emotional
that you feel you're being overwhelmed?
how can I bring you back to me?
tell me what I need to do to make you stay
there's still hope for us, right?
or have I lost you already?

i may revise this at some point, so any constructive criticism is appreciated!

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  • Lizzie-Moffat
    September 10
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    This is a really good poem and there is no need to revise this!