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Motionless

I feel everything && still the things i miss,
Sadly the people in my memories,
I'm someone they'll forget.
Leaving as fast as they came,
&& it hasn't hit me yet,
I wanna run before they do,
Would they miss me then?
Life's about moving on but I'm yet to take a step,
holding on to my past footprints,
I cannot move just yet.

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I am not ready to move on. At all. Final decision, but i'm gunna try anywho. It's life. ha. I hope you enjoy this.

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  • sgking123 gold member
    September 12

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    wow

    these were deep words.dont you worry..allseems to be hurrying and doing..but think what do they aceive at the end...most regret and guilt.....a pretty poem this one dear


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    September 11
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    i like this.

    i love you jo.