I was out for a ride one day
just crusing down the big highway
enjoying the view of an early fall day
no place to go just passing the time away
I heard this loud boom
and then I saw a red flame
shoot high in the sky
I heard sirens of firetrucks
as they came racing by
as I came closer to the flames
I saw it was a gas station
going up in flames
I pulled to the side to watch
I saw this one person
standing all alone
about a hundred feet from the flames
I wondered why she was all alone
I walked up and tapped her
on the shoulder
I ask if she was alright
she turned around and was I suprised
there stood J amie Coudre
she said all I wanted
was to open their small safe
to get a few bucks
I ask her what happened
J amie said oh I forgot again
that I wasn't in canada
I used a usa liter of nitro
and blew the whole thing up
I said come with me
I will tell you about
a caper I am planning
the entire gang of
partners in crime
will have a part in it
I will tell you the name of the caper
but don't tell anyone yet
I am calling it THE GOLD CAPER
watch for it soon
oh yew noone was hurt
at the gas station it was closed
and as usual J amie got away clean
Author notes
i used no puncuation marks and capitai letters only with (Is and J amie and the gold caper
Gas station robery-- J amie Coudre
A contest entry
- Partners In Crime Contest by Partners In Crime.
1100 points, ended September 24, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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What fun to have you write about me in a caper...I see you have not forgotten how I screwed up a couple of them already...A little more practice and I will get it down pat...Good thing I got away clean again...time to plan the next one...I am running low on cash again...think the crime world will survive me...
Good luck Ed...I always love your poems..
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Lotsa fun to play around with your friends like this. I suppose no one was listening when Mama said to not play withmatches....and it just blows up from there.
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great
this was very good . I loved it . it was poetic and a story all in one i look forward to more of your poetry . your a great writer love yah papaw ed
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Thanks for the nice comment I much appreciated.
oho yew Welcome back to Allpoetry.
Missed you looking forward to reading some more of your poems
PapPaw ED.
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Lol Perfect! Ha ha ha she blew up teh gas station. LMAO! Great Write! Great Job! Good Luck in the contest!
[If you could put 'Gas station robbery/J aime Coudre' in the poem preview then thanks] =D
-Katie
AKA RawrrKat
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Prompt
I thought I had already put that in sorry and thanks for pointing it out to me.
I just fixed it.
Thanks for the nice comment.
ED.
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What a caper! A very interesting story, and even left a way for a sequel. Nicely done.
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Gee! What a good story about the lady, she's my AP auntie sister and a fun mistake! Glad everyone is safe and so good for her to see you on time!
Thank you for your good participation and funny story. I wish you luck in the contest
~Massy~
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Sheeshe... you'd a thought J aime coudre woulda learned her lesson by now. That last caper where she blew up the train and all the money shoulda taught her something. I think we oughta check closer on her from now on before we let her loose with her explosives
Fortunatly no one was hurt in this one, which is a little bit better than the train robbery.
Best of luck in the contest, Ed
Dee
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