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Love is life's chokehold.

I've heard one say that "When life gets you down, get up and walk it off."
I've been walking my whole life.
When life gives you love, don't leave it.
Take it, cherish it, and preserve it.
Use it to make you whole and never break back down to getting up.
When life gives you love, make something of it.
People have also said, "It is better to love and to lost, than to never have loved at all."
Try it and then see how much of a good thing love is.
So when love looks like it has you in a choke hold, choke back.
Give love back ten fold.
So when love gets you down, just remember.
Love is life's choke hold and will never let you down when you find the right one.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 12

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    The moral of the write is quite clear and evident in your words; the final line makes me smile for two reasons, one I've found the right one and married him, two even though he is the right one, there will always come a time when it'll let you down, even unintentionally - nothing nor anyone is as perfect as 'love' is meant to be

    I do admire this very much

    I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us

    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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  • nous. gold member
    September 10
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    hah, wow.
    quite the excellent thought.