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Falling

When an angel falls what is it that you hear?
A cry in the trees??
Or how about a whisper on the wind??
Do you wish to find out??
Does it bug you not to know??
I'll let you in on my little secret.
Look tonight for the dark lotus in the sand,
Pluck this hold this in your hand.
And when the last petal falls,
Look to the sky and see,
Me fall.......

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  • DaH Kidd Starr
    October 6
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    OMG I LUV THIS POEM IT MAKES ME WONDER ABOUT WATZ GOING ON IN UR LYFE AND ANGELS FALLING....I LUV IT