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Pain

Visible scars
Unseen shards
Torn souls
Wearing eyes
Unkown Thoughts
Tattered skin
Picked scabs
Open sours
Fresh tattoos
Bleeding scratches
Puffy blisters
Careless actions
Leaking eyelids
Tense body
Shaking temple
Complete numbness

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