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My gods!

I love to sit in comfort on a train
Not any train, it must be hauled by steam
I know that soon I'll see my gods again
Reliving that most foolish schoolboy dream

The dragon's roar that greets the signal's rise
The blast of black and then the clouds of white
Magnificently pasted in the eyes
Of worshippers who've seen the transport light

We know at heart that steam can't be the way
For business trips or slogging into work
But living steam can crown a special day
For all those folk who share my little quirk

It warms the globe by several tons a mile
But glorious steam makes this green poet smile!


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Inspired by The Ten Fifteen by Lulu Gee

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  • Thomas Scott gold member
    September 13

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    more, please

    Yes, please!
    More railing against the Gods of Global Warming!
    You are my kind of Green!

    Tom


  • Legend silver member
    September 10

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    Everyone of me and my friends wanted to be train drivers when we were young Its much like firemen today.The beauty of the railways went out with steam Shapes, colours, names. all got rolled into ugly no style diesel ( my opinion anyway
    Great write my friend


  • Lulu Gee silver member
    September 10

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    Yes ME...I enjoy it...love trains
    You penned this with great speed...ha!!!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 10

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    well i know one or two who will enjoy this

    hope they do

    thanks

    Tory