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What is left now ?

What is left now
you said goodbye
I said I was sorry
what more can I do
I am out of your heart
I am out of your Head

What is left now
I am to Weak
to be with out you
Your to strong
to be with me

What is Left now
a broken heart
A puddle of tears
A lost love
That is what is left

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  • camus gold member
    October 12

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    I felt your despair in this poem. It is as though you still love and need him but the reverse is not true or he ACTS as though he doesn't need you, possibly a male syndrome. Actually, it reads like a song, a lament. Either way, I liked it as it conveyed your sadness so powerfully.


  • GothicFyre
    October 1

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    very touching, i've been there done it and i loved this poem. Beautiful writing, my friend, keep the good stuff rolling an then I can read more!!!


  • lil angel
    September 23
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    wow

    this is so touchin. makes me think of my ex boyfriend