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Reminiscing

Missing image
You
always
undress me
and caress me
like old lovers do
beneath the silver stars.
I writhe with eyes firmly shut,
breathing deeply with abandon.
dreaming scoffs and teases me knowing
reminiscing blinds me to the future.

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  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    September 19

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    This is so beautiful and it is nice to see some form poetry.
    I love the visuals you have conjured up in my mind.

    Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you.

    Suzi


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 11
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    Strikingly,
    hauntingly
    beautiful!!!

    An art form unto itself!

    M-C

  • goalsv
    September 11
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    Beautiful poetry and great form, a nice smooth and comforting read.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 11

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    Very nice job. I especially like the first four lines of the pyramid. It is very sensual.

    Mike


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    September 10

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    So very beautiful, I really love this poem,from start to end simply breathtaking , I hope you have a beautiful day xoxo

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