Hope is mankind’s way to adjust
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RemyLa Rhyme Form
The RemyLa Rhyme Form, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consists of 4 stanzas. Each stanza has four lines. The syllable count per stanza is 8/10/12/8 and rhyme scheme is abca defd ghig jklj. The first word of stanza 1 must also be the last word of stanza 4. The last word of stanza 1 must also be the first word of stanza 2 and the last word of stanza 2 must be the first word of stanza 3. Finally, the last word of stanza 3 must also be the first
word of stanza 4.
This form is named after Laura's daughter, Remy Lawren Lamarca. La is her signature.
Taken from scriptures:
(Romans 8:24-25; Hebrews 11:1,7; Lamentations 3:18; Job 7:6; Isaiah 38:18; Job 17:15)
In a list
A contest entry
- Hope... by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended September 14, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful, words of wisdom..
Love and
's to you sis
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I love the scriptures you based this on!
Yes, the assured expectation of things hoped for... a reality, not wishful thinking.. assured! And I do believe His will will come to pass soon and all the hopelessness in the world will give way.
"For God knows your heart when you pray" <-- sometimes it's so hard to think we are worthy of His love and help.. but this part is so true and reminds me of 1 John 3: 19,20 that we shall assure our heart's before Him in whatever our hearts condemn us in, for He is greater than our hearts.. that's so comforting!
Thank you for this wonderful write!
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You have done wonderous work with this form! This flows very nicely. The meaning is very deep, yet does not overpower the simple language. You have once again put very deep emotion and wisdom into simple and beautiful words.
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A very inspirational write buddy,
wonderully done as always.
All the best in the contest.
Ken
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a bit conplicated
as always an interesting read.
Jim
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a lovely piece penned by the form Queen I have tried this one and I must say enjoyed it BUT you, you did it justice.
Nicely done, best of luck to you in the contest, I am sure Kiwi will adore this one as well.
Love,
Tory
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Thank you Tory, It's wonderful to see your signature on one of my poems.
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Amera,
You know how I love to write you some crazy long winded poetic commentary, in this case I will skip it and simply say....
How sweet it is to read a poem by you.
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Well you nailed another form.
Beautifully written words.
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Wow~
Bless Your Heart Beautiful
and Love the message You brought forth
also in the form You delivered it int Bravo!!
Powerful Energy also Emotion~
Touches deep Sweet Soul
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice
Best wishes in the contest
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Like many words, hope has a variety of meanings. The kind of hope you describe in your poem is a spiritual hope that can also be described as faith. Another type of hope is the desire to carry on when thing become desperately tough. It may involve making hard decisions or just clinging on for dear life. All sentient creatures have this kind of hope and, like faith, it is a gift from God.
You see, once again, your poetry has kicked my mind into gear. I hope your poem gives Jackie what she needs.
Love, Peter
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Wow thanks for adhering to this contest, this is what I needed, you wrote it exactly how the scriptures tell it. Excellent. Blessings.
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I love the scriptures you use in this work of art. I am truely blessed to read this.
Joe
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Oh nicely done, my Sis!
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Sweet Amera my rubber stamp is called into action once again
EXCELLENT
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How wonderful to read you ...
when you combine poetry with upliftment ...but then ... you do that always! Your page is simply divine, and so are you, Amera. I have grown to love you and your poetry very much.
May your dreams come true in the very small detail thereof ...
Love
Myra
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Wow
Brilliant my dear
My oh my you have defined "Hope" all so well
Lovely form, this is new to me...thanks for the info
Third stanza is my favorite...
It speaks the profound truth and is spiritual as well
Slendid job Bravo
As always you Dazzle me with
your marvelous talents
Wish you the very best in the contest
Keep your talented quill dancing
Much love my friend
David
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Oh thank you; it's a new form to me too. Laura asked me to try it.
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*sigh* Amen.
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