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Elixer of Life

Ah, how sweet,
life's magic elixer.
Even one drop,
makes a heart beat
much quicker. . .

Ah, how nice,
life's beautiful drink.
A swallow, but a mouthful,
not quite enough,
I think. . .

Ah, how warm,
Life's wonderful fluid.
Fill my onxy goblet.
Need more?
I'll see to it!

Hmm, how much,
to fill my cup?
A flash, lightning fast,
silver steel,
have enough?

I wrote it in jail, I dunno lol XP

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  • Casey Jane
    September 10
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    Love it...jail or not.

    Casey Jane