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Portrait of a Star.

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Cosmos supernova, portrait of a star
flame inside eternity, reach my eyes so far
stellar constellations, clustered milky way
where my life this darkness, far, so far away.

Spiral lays this galaxy, soulled amorphous cloud
supercluster radiance, manifest and proud
Where my cry and further, time my life will see
burns my heart to conquest, named infinity.

Nova, supernova, radiance of space
such my unawereness, darks this lonely place
grant me this, my journey, depth of evermore
soul beyond my freedom. Star, this wish will soar.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I am a huge fan of rhyming poetry

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  • BabyBun silver member
    September 11

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    Wow I can tell how much you love rhyme - this is an excellent piece on a really unusual subject. Thanks for entering!