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stove top + finger

metal hot white
burning flesh magnet
squeeze cold iced
frantic for tea
lost voice lost
terrified nerve endings
like tiny woodland creature
blister
like
i
knew
you
would

Author notes

OWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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  • girl shaman
    September 10

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    all i got to say is writing about getting burned and then pulling it off is amazing! great to read you again


  • righteousme
    September 10

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    owww is right ... this was a great little ditty ... thanks for sharing with us ... lol ...


  • sixtimesseven
    September 10

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    I like the
    blister
    like
    I
    knew
    you
    would.


  • Tinkerbell-Or-Me
    September 10

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    I KNOW THIS<3

    you make beauty from awkward places,
    where no one else would dare to prod for it.
    <3333