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Litany of Stone

I am the rock.
I am the untouched.
I am the serene.
I am the strength of mountains.
I am the slumbering power.
I am the mantle.
I am the molten core.
I am the stone girded soul.
I am the rock...

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  • quantumsurveyor
    October 2

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    A SIX!

    You know I have to admit that I really like this and I wish that I had written it -- -- no higher praise than that from one poetess to another!

    I do though have a suggestion why not have it centred thus turning it into a kind of lantern/concrete poem because when centred it looks quite rocklike.

    A great poet from Oz -- whatever next?


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 17

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    Ahh.. as said below... this does radiate power. I hope this is true and that you do feel like this my friend! I am trying to find that strength.. gah!


  • subliminal girl
    September 14

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    This radiates power, strength and strong will. Very pure and powerful.
    I told you that I thought this was an excellent write. And it loses none of its essence or strength, no matter how many times I read it.

  • J Macabre gold member
    September 10

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    This was excellent. I love the sheer strength in this. This is a write of inspiration and hope. A look into the power that lies in all of us. Brilliant job.