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This September Morning

Before the world wakes up -
    dark and dusty blues
          magic of stars and moonlight
                the time before the sun
                      this September morning


One lone rooster crows
    breaking through the early morning air
          tree frogs creaking, animals at play
                coolness of autumn envelopes me
                      this September morning


I gaze in silent wonder at the sky,
    and listen to the sounds of life...
            such mysteries our universe holds
                  how I wish I knew the answers,
                        this September morning   


Tranquil time when nature speaks
    to those who hear with their hearts
          and see with their mind’s eye;
                dawn slowly approaches
                      this September morning.


9/10/09

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  • CalistaMoon
    September 10

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    This is fantastic. I love the imagery. It made me feel like I was right there with you. Very captivating.


  • Olivias Violin
    September 10

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    Beautiful


  • Blood N Tears
    September 10

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    "Before the world wakes up -
    dark and dusty blues
    magic of stars and moonlight
    the time before the sun
    this September morning"

    My favorite lines.... This is great. It perfectly describes a September morning. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work.
    ♥Lillie♥