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Past

Am I ready yet?
Life is moving on
And I’m still here
Living in this regret

This life-
This dream-
This beautiful
Train wreck

The sun will come up
And tomorrow will come
I must move on
I must be done

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  • sgking123 gold member
    September 10

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    wow

    you express this feeling of being left behind so very well..I was thrilled by each word....it was kind of deja vu for me..and must have been for many readers. I am adding you as a favo.Pls do likewise..and yes there is fresh poetry on my page..if you wish pls visit and comment.