The water is still running out my eyes,
Whenever I shout, you can't hear my cries,
It is so plain now for me to see,
Nobody in this world was meant to love me.
You stab a knife into my heart,
You tear it out and rip it apart,
I lie on the ground, tears blocking my view,
How could I love a creature like you?
One day guilt will overpower your hate,
But for me, death is my fate,
I lie down to die, and close my eyes,
And think of those letters, packed full of lies.
You played trickery on my mind,
I look now but there's no love to find,
My anger boils inside my head,
As you leave, thinking I'm dead.
But now you turn to me and say,
"I didn't want it to end this way,
I somehow felt our love wasn't true,
I couldn't continue loving you."
A young man comes in, a sword in his belt,
He comes to my side, and beside me does knelt,
He whispers to me "I will save you!"
The prince from my dreams has actually come true.
I try to sit up, my head in a spin,
There's a fight going on, let my prince win,
I open my eyes to see what's going on,
But the fight has gone terribly wrong.
My murderer comes to finish the job,
He stands over me as I start to sob,
He throws down his sword and that's when I scream,
I wake up in my bed, it was all just a dream.
Author notes
This is a really sad poem and I wrote it because I was having nightmares for a few nights. None of this stuff has ever (and never will) happened to me.
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This was a deep dream that you had. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work. Thanks for enterin and best of luck to you in the contest.
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no words needs to be said. Amazing work. -Angie
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Oh Izzy...nobody your age should have such horrid nightmares...but we cant control em at alll...Dan
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Interesting piece. I liked it very much. I sometimes have nightmares, too. But my nightmares, sometimes, come into my life. I don't know, if I could actually write about them. Because some of the nightmares, I have are really bad. I sometimes have a tough time, trying to express myself, when it comes to bad things that have happened to me. But you really did a good job, in expressing yourself, in this piece. Take care and have a great day.
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wow the is so cool! i loved the rhyme, the flow of words. it was a tiny but awkward in some places, but still, it was great! loved the meaning, and then it was all just a dream. i usually hate it wen its all just a dream, but u made it flow into ur piece quite nicely so all's forgiven
. loved it.
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i liked it was really awesome
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Very beautiful i lyk this thanx for entering.......
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