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Medicine Hat

Medicine Hat,
upturned and
outstretched.

Leaning with
the buffalo,
waving back
from the matted
and gold fields.

A canadian mirage,
an oasis to plunge
to wallow and
turn.

Absconding regret,
when the tree has rooted.

Through ghosts
and dreams alike.

About a city in Canada I know, so know your history if reading this one.

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  • Afxb
    September 21

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    "Absconding regret
    when the tree has rooted
    Through ghosts
    and dreams alike"
    This is so sad Johnny....and like Mr Xavier I don't understand the earlier portions!!


  • Xavier X
    September 21

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    Johnny
    I have read this several times and can't begin to fathom it out.All of it!
    I have vague ideas what a medicine hat might be ....and is it the (or its owner) and to whom is it/he waving back and why?

    I have not seen the Canadian mirage ...and cannot work out how an oasis (or a mirage) can plunge to wallow
    I am trying Johnny...tell me I am not goiing insane.