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Engraved Yourself

Sceptics built my iron shield
and I carried it with pride
at one stage in time
I even held it up against you.

It didnt do much to help...
whatever it was that you possess,
arrows stolen from Eros' bow?
because you got to me...

Passed my preconceptions
through the illusion of indifference
tickled high walls to the ground
and engraved yourself onto this heart.

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  • DamnedtoGlory
    September 10
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    I dig that, it's pretty deep, hella fresh...