Prince like he marches through out the large room
Angelic when he is a bad boy, thinks he is doomed
Trouble to the cat we have sometimes as they play
Charismatic his manners, makes us laugh every day
Happy all the time while wagging his tail so very fast
Energy filled, he is always playing, how does he last
Special to those who love him, tail flies at half mast
Author notes
Acroustic= Patches
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A contest entry
- About any kind of animal Wild or Domesticated PW allowed! by Sheilasbabygal4life.
700 points, ended September 12, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Simply fantastic and The dog is absolutely adorable. He looks so happy. I love this acrostic as it speaks so wonderfully of your friend and shows the love and care you hold for him. I have actually never seen a shihtzu dog for real, at least i don't think so, but he is beautiful. A wonderful little tribute to your friend. Thank you so much for sharing.
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ADORABLE!!!!!
He sounds adorable! Pets are so lovable as they play and carry on with other animals!
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i love this...you haave real talent
thanks too for the laughter of this
bravo
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You are the cutest thing writing about your lil dog. You did a wonderful job crafting this acrostic Sam. You always write the sweetest things. Great work.
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This was good. I liked the way it flowed. It was short and straight to the point. This would have to be my favorite part:
Prince like he marches through out the large room
Angelic when he is a bad boy, thinks he is doomed
Just because you put that he was a prince that marches through a large room and the angelic part. It was good. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck to you! -
what a great acrostic! Your vocabulary is very good. I loved this... it flowed with such good rhyming. Priceless! Best wishes in the contest...
karen
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he is so adorable and this poem shows just how much you love him , i smiled and also had a tear over this fine write . love you gal and that pen , DAD i am
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Thank you Dad I Am! You are so precious. You always say the kindest things.
I love you.
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and i read it so fast to get there that i dindt notice it was acrostic damn clever , not only was it a fine piece but super in its layout too you amaze me really , and im so proud of you . GOD bless ya sweet daughter of mine. dad xo
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