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Preventative Care On A Flat Earth

it's been said, 'crisis is opportunity'
for who?
for you, in your squalid spirit?
if you find a solution I suppose
but if not
then it's left for the vultures
looking for spent virtues found in flesh

stars burn down like plasma flowers raining radiance upon our world.
smelting in the furnace of physical visions and prisms we subsist on deserts and rain forests.

remembering the coin
has many sides:
the face
the symbols
and where we swing
on the ridges
of the rim

the world is flat
global, plastic and electromagnetic
careful what you do with it

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  • Oleander
    September 11
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    I really like this poem!


  • Blindlover
    September 10

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    Killer write. I think this is excellent. It's deep without sounding like an activist reading in his obnoxious monotone voice attempting to stir the audience. Well sir, you have stirred me without all the fluff. Great write. I am impressed again at the poets i find. Keep it up.


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    September 10
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    this is excellent... a very fne write
    T


  • Fibe Kill-DFW Punk-
    September 10

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    I love the way you write. It's nothing short of ecstasy to read your work and the way you word things. The flow of this is incredible, and I love the message. Most of your work has a pretty awesome message behind it. Does this have any connection to The Presidents speech last night?


    • dabpunx
      September 10
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      thanks a lot man. and yeah i wrote this shortly after that speech. actually after watching charlie rose interview pundits about the speech on pbs.

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